The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/05
So very clever! Awesome job!
Cute story! :-D
05/31/05
Cute!
06/01/05
Too fun! Great, realistic dialogue (although I don't know if angels REALLY talk that way but it's realistic to me! LOL)
Clever entry, from the title to the last sentence.
Blessings, Lynda
06/02/05
Love the creative style and dialog, great job.
Fun entry, Lissa -- very creative take on topic. It really holds interest and prompts the reader to demand, "Move over, I want to see, too!" Congratulations on your win!
06/06/05
Shivers time Lissa. Although you wrote this in your usual, delightful style, it still managed to give me tingles as I reached that last line. I loved it - and so did the judges. Wonderful to see you up there in the Winner's Circle again. This will be a wonderful addition to the next Anthology. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I was trying to figure out who and what they were trying to see? Nice job to keep your reader. Congrats on the win.