The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
How creative is this!!!! If we in the Body of Christ hold a grudge, then we spite our own selves. Very out of the box and insightful. Love it!
02/23/08
Extremely clever, and fun to read.

May be a little bit too close to the actual saying, perhaps? But an effective allegory nevertheless.
02/26/08
Interesting and amusing take on the topic. I enjoyed reading it.
02/26/08
So clever, I loved the pace and the ideas of this piece.
02/26/08
You have a lot of good thoughts... I liked this especially,
"Heart was occupied with love
Fingers touching God above
Knees were bent in fervent prayer
Body seemed safe without care"

Then your mention of the "cold shoulder", and "the nose out of joint" was just plain fun. Thanks for writing this. Keep working!