The Official Writing Challenge
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Great Story! I loved it!
What a lovely story. And I loved your title. Any of your readers with friends who have kids with Downs (as I do) will really identify with this story and be touched. It's beautiful.
Thankyou for writing this, God touched me through this piece.
Lovely story. This kind of love is glorious and God given!
This was a nicely developed piece. You drew the reader in and slowly unfolded the story. There was also a wonderful message here of the value of people through God's eyes. Very well done!
I would be shocked if this one didn't rise to the top of the editor's choices this week. Excellent, excellent writing. Touched my heart.
Blessings, Lynda
Yeah, this one gets my vote (mine doesn't count), I loved it on many levels.
 A gift to every reader is found in this tender, eye-opening piece. Your words touched my heart from start to finish! I truly enjoyed this outstandingly written short! Congrats on your well-deserved recognition!!
So delightful! I love Frank! Great message, wonderful writing...and a winner. Congratulations, Lois. A well-deserved wooo-hooo for you! :)
Oh how beautiful, Lois! Strummed wonderful chords on every heartstring of my heart........ LOVED IT! Your gift of writing teaches compassion and helps one see life through the eyes of others.
Very touching. Better than highly commended in my book. Nice title.
A delightfully told story. I've had the privilege of teaching a Downs child and he continued to surprise us all with is love and teachability, aspects you've captured beautifully.
Beautiful! Wow. I love it. Glad it got a place in the books.