The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
Aw...beautifully written story of Joseph. He truly was one example of "not crying over spilt milk"...you nailed the topic with this. Your description of the coat had me mesmerized, and it wasn't till several sentences later when realization set in...this is about Joseph. Your description of the bothers "creased forheads resting on cool marble" and just seeing their care-worn bodies through Joseph's eyes, and then the compassion Joseph had for them. Very, very nice work on this.
02/16/08
This is a nice character profile of Joseph. Good job.
Laury
Wow, I read some of this out loud to a co-worker and she was as impressed as myself. So many good lines here, so just keep up the good work, I feel that we have a placer here!!
02/22/08
Congratulations, JoAnne, on placing 8th in your level and 16th overall. Great work!
02/25/08
Wonderful insight. There is so much treasure in this Biblical story, I am in awe of God's Word. And you bought a different dimension to light. Thank you. God bless and keep writing.