The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
This was a good idea and you began it well but it seemed to go nowhere. Sorry to be depressing :(
02/16/08
The point about not worrying about things that are out of your control is good, and using the NASDAQ is a good idea.
Great dialogue in carrying the piece along - it was clear and easy to read. The ending did kind of fall off a bit, but the story was still interesting and well done.
02/19/08
Though the story may have an ending that's not as dramatic as some, it ends in a realistic manner. Not knowing what will happen, but trusting the Lord anyway, is the point the MC's wife and co-worker are making in this entry. And, you end it with the possible consequences of NOT believing the Lord is in control, so I think it's a good, and accurate story!