The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Beautifully written and very realistic (apart from what I think is the fact that if a house is not in a flood plain the insurance company has to pay up for flooding damages).
I love the indomitable spirit of the mother in your story. The descriptions are excellent.
02/16/08
What an incredible woman!! I could learn a LOT from her!! I could feel the horror of the daughter as she walked in as well as Mom's calmness. 'Just things' is so very right.
Veru realistic story and love the mother's attitude.
02/17/08
What an amazing attitude Mom has. The contrast between the two characters is striking and effective. Very well written.
Well done and very tender.