The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Beautifully written and very realistic (apart from what I think is the fact that if a house is not in a flood plain the insurance company has to pay up for flooding damages).
02/15/08
I love the indomitable spirit of the mother in your story. The descriptions are excellent.
02/16/08
What an incredible woman!! I could learn a LOT from her!! I could feel the horror of the daughter as she walked in as well as Mom's calmness. 'Just things' is so very right.
02/16/08
Veru realistic story and love the mother's attitude.
02/17/08
What an amazing attitude Mom has. The contrast between the two characters is striking and effective. Very well written.
02/18/08
Well done and very tender.