The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Your dialog is great. I loved this sentence, “Sorrow is a lovely sentiment…but it changes nothing." (I may have to borrow it. :) ) You've creatively woven this, with mystery and you've left a lot of room for the reader to speculate. Then there are the spiritual applications you can make. Good work on this.
02/16/08
Oh my, this was great! Absolutely loved it!
Laury
02/17/08
How incredibly creative! How many different ways can you say the topic "without using a literal example" or "repeating the actual phrase." TOO funny! Great job.
This is great. I love the tagless diaogue. It was easy to follow and kept me reading. I really wanted to know what they were talking about, but that gives me something to think about. Good job.
02/18/08
Loved this one. So creative. A real winner. Keep it up.
02/19/08
Very clever. I love the dialogue in the allegory. Very well presented.
02/22/08
Congratulations, Stephanie, on placing sixth in your level and eleventh overall (SO close to the top ten!). Great work!