The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
I love the end especially - the dialog is just right, and encouraging in a subtle way. Nice.
I'd like to see more of Connie's restoration, keep writing, this felt real and true to life.
I love to read about a life being turned around. Good story here.
02/16/08
This is a great story, full of hope! Thanks for sharing!
Laury
02/20/08
Wonderful main character; very authentic. I enjoyed this one.
02/20/08
The title is a good clue to the emphasis of the story. I like the characters and the dialogue and I think this is a gem of a story, with an ending that is full of hope.
You developed your main character well. Glad you made the ending a happy one. Great title!
02/20/08
Yes, death is definitely an irreversible event that we can't change. (a double spilt milk with the probabtion sentence)... I liked the second chance opportunity message. Is this the MC that talks to you? :)
02/21/08
This wasn't lame at all! It was a slow and steady real story, and those are never lame.