The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
This is SO fun! Love the "play-by-play," and the voice of this piece. The opening and closing BOTH take the cake, too.

May have to forward this one around ;) (I, of course could NEVER relate - but I just may know someone who could) ;)
02/16/08
Oh, this is fantabulous! Simply wunnerful:) Too much fun for a Saturday morning!
Laury
02/16/08
Very cute. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well written and flawless.
02/16/08
Ha--so much fun in these 750 (or less) words. I love your names (Dinsley Falls, Essy, Beulah, and Granny Smith-for the pie) Your tone is great. "No Question" this was fun reading. :)
I think, this one is a winner! Loved it all, keep up the good words. Thanks to Joanne for including it in the jewels.
02/21/08
Congratulations on your EC! There's no question it belongs there!!!! :)
02/21/08
Congrats on your EC and HC with this!!!!
02/21/08
Congratulations on your EC. This is a hoot. Love the voice. And very nice job with the topic.
02/21/08
I absolutely LOVED this piece.. what a fun creative idea.. oh my.. it IS fiction right?? Loved it from start to finish.. one of those .. smiling is a takeaway pieces.. you deserved the EC.. congrats on your win!