The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
This is definitely a new format for me! It was very interesting, and read quite nicely once I adjusted to it. Very nice! ^_^
02/14/08
Well, you sent me to my Bible. :) Wonderful reference. I like the structure of this, and of course the message behind it.
02/15/08
Lovely poem with a unique format. Well done.
02/16/08
Very creative...I love your use of eighty-six...then your reference to Psalm 86:7. Nice work on this.
02/16/08
Very nice poem. Quite creative.
Laury
02/18/08
A poem!...a very interesting poem. Wow, you spent a lot of time on this...with the regular ryhthm and style.
Well done
02/18/08
Terrific as always. Love your style of writing.
Great poem in an unusual style.
I loved the picturesque lines... "Where shards from glass of
Shattered windowpanes in my
Blue eyes caused suffering and painful trouble."

Wonderful choice of Psalm too.
Well done!
02/19/08
LOVE the title, the creativity, the format and the content. Incredible piece.
02/19/08
Awesome! You're a very talented poet, and I enjoyed this very much.
02/20/08
It looks like you spent a lot of time on this and it paid off.