The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Wow...tragic, but powerful. Excellent use of scripture, too. I liked the vagueness of the masks to depict the state he was in. Great!
Very sad.
You bring out an interesting point. Sometimes we fail to let go by continuing to cry, sometimes by never starting.
02/15/08
Wow. What a story. 'Hearing' his thoughts added so much depth and emotion. So sad.
02/16/08
I wonder if this is who I think it is - absolutely powerful and poignant and stunning and masterful. Wow.
You told us in your clue: "This was a very experimental type of writing for me."
Then experiment again and again, because it works! This is excellent. A look at both sides of grief and dispair. This is so well done Tim!
02/19/08
Well, I think you should experiment more often. This was heart-breaking and beautiful.
02/20/08
My heart is wrenched in two. What a passionate and powerful piece. Thank you for sharing it.
02/20/08
This is so heart breaking. It brought tears to my eyes. It's so sad, but you captured the feelings, the emotion and everything. It is so powerful!