The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This is so tender and sad at the same time. It gave me goosebumps reading the part with the angel watching over them. Your title certainly fits this piece. It is one of my favorites for this week. Great writing! ^_^
Very well written and moving. Not sure that the incident could be described as merely 'spilt milk' (That's me being fussy!), but it's great to see how good came from the situation, and how it brought the characters closer to God. Well done!
Very engaging - a good read. You did an excellent job with the "drunk talk." Much to ponder here too. Keep writing!
I don't usually get goosle flech over these entries, but your writing is so clear and precise that this became real to me, keep up the good words.