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Oh yeah! Wow. Love your title! This is certainly very different, the ending with the twist caught me off guard, I didn't think that it'd turn out that way, but you made it seem so perfect in the seamless shift. I love the bit with the eagle-how rare is that, I bet? Nice writing, this is one of my favorites this week! ^_^
What a great story! I love the writing, I love the creativity, I love the depth of meaning. Very good.
Wonderous descriptive owrk here. Keep up the good words, now I have to go look of Wood field and see if he is real ;)
AWESOME! Your word pictures are great and the story is just marvelous--ironically sad but moving. And how well it fits the topic! A real winner.
Vivid descriptions and excellent word choices in this piece.
This is wonderfully descriptive in both setting and emotion. I absolutely love the ending, and all that built up to it.
Great title for this piece! Good writing!
You had me right there in the room with him. I enjoyed your ironic twist.