The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
This was fun. The picture of a born optimist. Well done.
02/15/08
Now that's one disaster with a happy ending! The characters are so well drawn, I could visualize each one. Love the humor and the dialogue, too.
I love, love this story. The mc's voice is wonderful.
02/15/08
Great characterization - so clever! Enjoyed the read.
02/15/08
Oh, I love this! The characterizations (and their dialog!) were great. Very enjoyable to read!
02/15/08
You're gonna hate this word--but that what this entry is--cute. :)
This was a fun read. I could see it as a sitcom episode. Very nicely done.
02/16/08
What fun! I would risk a house on fire for a guy like Ed!
Laury
02/18/08
I LOVE the title! This was a delightful read. Well done! I would like to see a few more details... like maybe the characters' expressions, etc., towards the end of the piece, to go with the dialog. That word limit gets us every time! Great read! Blessings, Cheri
Great voice! I love the upbeat attitude of your MC.