The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
EWWW! WOW!!! Such a powerful story! I had no clue who it was until the name Lazerus was mentioned. Excellent. Amazing. Nitpicking here... I think it's spelled sermoniZing.

Awesome writing.
02/14/08
Elegant descriptions and a wonderful use of words and phrases. Great writing.
02/15/08
Masterful story-telling. The wondering and analyzing of each "fault" of Jesus led to a powerful conclusion.
This is powerful writing, word upon word carefully placed in this emotional story.
02/15/08
Masterfully powerful and amazingly descriptive. Wow.
02/15/08
That last line is fabulous! "He is my soul anchor, my unswerving confidence for all that lies ahead."
02/15/08
A lot of love and care went into this one. You get into the emotions and thoughts well.
This is deep and very powerful. You drew me in with the feeling of present-day, and gave new meaning to an old familiar story.