The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
Clever idea! I like the name--"God provides!"

This could probably be tightened up a bit, and I think this kind of story works best in past tense.

I appreciate your creativity!
02/10/08
A clever take on the topic - enjoyed the banter back and forth - and I love the "CEO's" name.

Caught some tense and POV shifts.

Enjoyed this read!
02/12/08
This was interesting! I liked the easy dialouge and how it flowed with the one word answers of "none" that was funny! I was chuckling near the end and enjoyed the read. There was one typo I noticed in the beginning, where I think a word was missing when he was thinking about the aquaintances who had referrered him. Otherwise, good job! ^_^