The Official Writing Challenge
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I always enjoy a bit of romance, and especially liked the last line.
02/10/08
Sweet little story - love the romance interspersed with tragedy.
02/11/08
A charming tale of tragedy and human endurance.
02/12/08
Oh, this was cute! The title was good, it caught my eye, I wanted to read more about this ice princess! Nice twist with the 'softie princess' that added a good bit of humor where it was needed, the last line was great, but instead of 'telling us' that Edwina was telling Val, you could omit that part, probably and just go with the punch line. Nice writing! ^_^