The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
Excellent in every way.
02/09/08
Very nice job with characterization of your MC especially. You kept me intrigued throughout.
Loved this and your story telling ability. I really liked the cuckoo clock telling the time to that ole busy body, too. Great job of presenting this week's topic and making us step back to see things are not always as they seem.
02/12/08
ROFL! This is too funny! I'm glad that David's witness was a new believer because of his reaching out and especially how the entire 'herd of pious ladies' were able to see something that they hadn't expected. The last line was absolutely perfect though, I love that pastor-what a neat character! ^_^