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02/10/08
Lovely - and extremely thought-provoking and insightful. Wonderful.
02/10/08
Beautiful and powerful wrapped in one! I loved the last four stanzas, convicting yet giving hope, too.
Excellent message, and a different take of the topic than most. I like this a lot.
02/12/08
Lovely! A great take on this topic.
02/12/08
"I’ve spent too much time, with people like me" - speaks volumes. I can see why this was a jewel. Marvelous.
02/13/08
You're definitely one of our best poets--I love this!
End rhymes were nice and rhythm flowed. Funny, but I've come across the story of the woman with the alabaster jar of perfume several times this week, all depictng her as a prostitute. I was always taught that she was Mary, sister of Martha. I wonder which is true? Lovely poem.
Not a poetry fan, but this was wonderful. Such creative talent here. This should be published!!
02/13/08
wonderfully smooth, as always. Very well done.