The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful, authentic and shiver-producing.
Love the "Jewishness" of this - obviously a lot of research went into this piece (or you have the background already). This was compelling, and a fresh take on this ultimate betrayal.
This is very well written! The names, the words and the descriptions especially, you mostly pull this together with dialouge, that matches the speakers correctly! I loved the line with as you think in your heart, so are you, that is so true and it seemed to jump out at me as I read this piece. Truly wonderful writing, this is a favorite of mine this week! ^_^