The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - this reads like a segment from a novel. Excellent writing, and I love the ending..
I love how the title ties in to the story and the topic. What a turbulent time in history...
A well crafted story with a very satisfying ending. Christ's love proving even uniforms of different colours don't matter.
Wonderful! Very engaging, and I love the ending!
This is a beautiful story. Thank you for writing it. My heart was touched.
Wow, Linda: this is one of the best short stories I can remember reading - ever. Where are all the comments this amazing writing deserves? All I can say, again, is... wow!