The Official Writing Challenge
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Great description of William... in just a few simple words, I could feel the cold of him as well. Also, thanks for the reminder that real prayer does take sweat.
Good storytelling.
02/10/08
William gave me chills! Our God answers prayer.
"The Power of a Praying Wife" comes to mind.
I too could see William and sense his emanating chill.
Good descriptive piece.
02/13/08
Gave me goosebumps here. I'm so glad that her prayers made the difference, I could feel the change in character and mood here. The ending was just right for this piece. Nice job! ^_^