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02/09/08
Very, VERY interesting perspective! I was engaged throughout. You have quite the imagination!
02/11/08
This is awesome. I've got no red ink for you, just a nod of great respect for an extremely gifted writer. Creative, unique, fantastic voice...this is definitely one of my top reads this week.
Great voice and very creative!
02/11/08
Wow. A very creative entry and perspective on the topic. Very well done.
02/12/08
So much meaning behind the words. The matter-of-fact tone of voice emphasizes the sadness of this man's life and he ended it. Very unique perspective.
02/12/08
Oops-I meant to say, "how he ended it alone."
02/13/08
Wow. Can I say incredibly creative? Your title delivers a really descriptive piece, the places, the names and everything. I felt as if I were trekking around with him in the city and waiting to see what would come next. The last paragraph sums everything up. Nice job! ^_^
02/13/08
Your gift with words shines bright! Wonderful from start to finish!!
This is a remarkably creative take on this topic, written with excellence.
No red ink from me either. This was certainly well written and excellent in voice. I could visualize the scenes with voice over. Well done!