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02/09/08
You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere here - it felt creepy and frightening from the first word to the last (and that last sentence was PERFECT).
02/11/08
Atmospheric, preternaturally eerie, worthy of Milton. As the poet first expressed it, “Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heav’n”
02/11/08
Stunning writing--some of the best here!

I'm lost as to how this applies to this week's topic, though.

Love your title, and your mastery of mood.
02/11/08
Amazing, riveting entry. Your setting of mood is masterful.
02/12/08
Chilling descriptions of Satan-in the beginning paragraphs, especially. It's amazing how he won't give up the plan-and you captured his destructive hatred perfectly.