The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/05
I loved this piece. You put so much reality into the words. Nicely done.
I enjoyed the descriptions--especially the paragraph about the kitchen floor! LOL Good job.
05/31/05
Great entry - great perspective from a ninety year old woman. Loved the title too!
Nicely done.
Blessings, Lynda
05/31/05
Nicely done. Thank you.
06/06/05
 A mixture a many thoughts... ponderings, that will keep the reader thinking on them well after the last line is finished.
06/06/05
My expereince of people as they age is that they become self centred, self absosrsbed and bitter. Good to be shown another way through your character.