The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice work! This is a fitting poem for the challenge title...well done.
This is great--perfect fit for the topic and the meter was right on. I'm partial to poety, so I truly enjoyed your efforts on this.
This is VERY good - great imagery especially. It has a great rhythm to it.
Very nice job. Very smooth and entertaining read that ministered its point well. God bless.
Super! I can see this set to music--something folksy, with acoustic guitars and maybe some simple percussion.
I love this...especially the ballad format. Well written and a great take on the topic.
Very crafty. Great warning to heed. Nice poem.
Excellent! Also, creative take on the topic.
Very creative writing here. I really love the message of your ballade. Well done.
Great lyrical meter and wonderful message. Very, very creative and well delivered.
Very, very good writing. Great rhyme, meter, and thought. It's creative and your ending is chilling/perfect. Your experiment with this ballad was a success. I totally enjoyed it.
Very nice. Good rhyme and meter. I also would like to see it set to music.
Gave me goosebumps reading this piece! The refrain/chorus was my favorite part, this flowed very nicely and the story inside-well delivered! Excellent writing. ^_^
You could set this one to music... I like your title "Heaven's Hoodlum" - nicely done.
Excellent warning wrapped up in meter and rhyme. The last stanza just nails the point home. Good work.
Wonder! Your writing gift shines!!
What a wonderful ballad, creative, rhythmical, and with a powerful message.
Brilliant!. So easy to read. A job very well done.
Congratulations on your EC. This is very good.
Yay! Congrats on your level placing and EC!!!
Superb Job!!!!1 Congrats on EC. God bless.