The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
I like the way this story ended, but it had a lot of POV shifts (from first person to third, etc.) Those distracted me as I read. I think, with a little polishing, this could be a very effective testimony story-especially with teens-of how God can use anyone, no matter what kind of life they've led! The last line is certainly true for many Christians!
02/07/08
Great descriptions. I felt like I was right there with these guys. Good message, though it seems, to me, that maybe it is the opposite of the proverb. Maybe not, though - regardless, a good read for sure.