The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this song so I had to read your story. Thanks for sharing I enjoyed ever word. Keep it up!
02/07/08
A nice testimony-style story.

A little bit more description (showing rather than telling) would spice this up a bit more.

A wonderful message that is right on-topic.

02/07/08
I was right there with her in her search for true meaning to her life. Love the bits with her "friends" in the beginning-very descriptive. The end is a beautiful example of what Christ's love can do! This is an all-around lovely story and I enjoyed reading it very much.