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02/09/08
This is fun. Love the "fowl" language sprinkled throughout. Well done.
02/09/08
You can't tell me you weren't laughing when you wrote this. "egg on your face", "across the road" LOL.
02/10/08
Delightful. I love the line about becoming chicken salad.
02/10/08
Well, my goodness, this is incredibly delightful! I love the word play, the message, the poetic perfection. You're definitely where you belong!
02/10/08
I love all your chicken-talk :) from the "biddies" to "fly the coop" and "scratch out our existence".

This is perfect for the topic, "Since weíre branded as birds of a feather, By the kinds of companions we choose."

This is a wonderful poem. You should be proud. I love it!!!!
02/10/08
Oh so funny! Love the play on words-the poor little chick has a lot to learn. I like the "chicken salad" line, too! You're so very clever.
02/11/08
What? There are people who do not like word play? They should be tarred and feathered.
:-)
02/11/08
This is so good! It was a very clever thought that the name "chicken" comes from the fact that Peter denied Jesus.
What more can be said? Truly Masterful!
02/11/08
Your writing is amazing, your pen golden. What wisdom you are able to put in so few my meangingly verse. Thank-you for putting a smile on my face today with this bit of truth and witticism.
02/11/08
I love the "egg on your face" comment too. This is hilarious - a fun read!
02/11/08
Great fun! I love word play...and I love this entry!
02/11/08
I enjoyed all the plays on words, and I don't even know if I caught them all. Great job strutting your stuff.
02/14/08
Oooh, I just found this one. It is too funny...Chelsea Chicken! Heehee. I like the line with scratching their existence in the world. That's really great. ^_^
02/14/08
I Really love this entry. It is a refreshing change of pace and right on topic. Thank you so much for submitting this one!