The Official Writing Challenge
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A lot of truth here. I really like this line:
"Itís kind of odd growing up and not really fitting well into any group; and then barely fitting into a group who really did not fit in themselves."
The ending makes the story. Nicely done.
I like this. Like the MC's voice. Like the message at the end about hanging with Jesus. Laughed along with the Einstein comments.
Hehe. I could relate to the blank stare bit! I love the point the MC came to--He's the best one to fit in with!!
Oh I did like this. It kept me reading till the very end. I loved the voice, it was like watching a movie of his life.
Smart MC to realise "When I was hanging out with Jesus, I was in the group above all others".
Wish I felt like that ALL the time instead of being concerned that I don't seem to fit into a particular group.
Those associations growing up can have a lasting affect on us. Your observations of the group and your place in it are priceless.