The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
Clever - and wonderful job with the dialect. I must admit it was creatively surprising to use dialect like this in a poem - it was just different enough to grab my interest.
Not much for poetry and almost didn't finish reading it, but so glad I did. This was absolutely wonderful and so creative.
02/07/08
Love the dialect and love the ending especially. Good advice for anyone, too!
Good advice, and a fun way to tell it.
02/11/08
What a voice! And what a profound message. Very nice.
02/15/08
Wow! Really good with this...I can just hear someone talking with this accent. :) Congrats on your level placing and top 40 placing! Very well done!!!