The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this was good! My fav line "Was she speaking or singing?" I felt as if i knew the MC. Topic was on-spot, too. My preference isn't a glittery church!
02/01/08
Oh, your MC found my dream church! Perfectly on topic, and an easy, pleasant read. Love it!
02/04/08
Right on topic - and I especially loved the last line. Very nicely done.
02/04/08
Great article. So many churches concentrate so hard on their outward appearance that they forget about true Christian fellowship.
What a sweet and charming ending to Jayden's search! This is a piece we can all identify with...trying to find the church where we feel 'at home'. I'm blessed to enjoy a church where the stained glass glitters a golden glow of God Light that reaches right into each and every heart. Precious story, dear friend!
02/05/08
Very well done, and I love the little hint of romance. Lovely!