The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the first person account. It adds a great deal of emotion to MC's voice.
You held me throughout this whole piece. Great insights and excellent writing. Pitchfork Fred indeed!!
02/03/08
Yes, your title is good. Your warning is a perfect illustration of the topic. Great descriptions and good work on this.
02/04/08
You had me engaged and captivated from beginning to end. First person is PERFECT for this piece. Very well done.
02/06/08
One of the finest examples of voice that I've read here. Simply excellent.
02/06/08
Wow. So much emotion in here! This was pretty deep, the descriptions, the words, the feelings, wow. Anyway, I liked the end, the last line especially was pretty good. Nice writing! ^_^
02/06/08
I love the first person POV. Great voice extremely well told. God bless.