The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/08
Very interesting structure. I'm curious as to the name of the form -- with your first line repetition. I liked the "exotic beans" allusion. Your poetic descriptions are worthy of multiple reads. Nice work on this.
02/04/08
Very interesting structure and some very thought-provoking images. Enjoyed this.
Wow. This is a powerful piece. The formatting was a great compliment to the vivid imagery. Very good writing!
02/05/08
I love everything about this poem, from the alliteration in the title, to the imagery, to the perfect pacing of swell and decrescendo.
02/05/08
Absolutely purfect in every way!
02/05/08
I'm curious about the form too. I've never read/seen anything like this. Powerful final stanza. Your post in the message boards has made me more curious about poetry.