The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the friendship and caring nature between the two classmates...thoughtful writing.
I like the meaning of the word snail. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good words.
02/03/08
Your story is nicely written. You caught my interest with your "Outcast" title. The lesson within is tender and heart-warming.
02/04/08
Clever lesson for all of them.

A bit of the dialog seemed a touch unnatural, but that just could have been me. Nice job.