The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/08
Just excellent - wonderful story poem with an amazing message. Love this. Very KAesque ;)
Oh no! Self-esteem isn't all it's cracked up to be? :-)

I love your take on the topic, and your title as well.
The neurotic in me would tweek the meter in a couple of spots, but that's just me. It does not take away from the story/message.