The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/08
Amazingly vivid and masterfully done. This truly moved me. Wow!
02/02/08
Wow! What an absolutely incredible piece of work this is. You should be very proud of yourself. This is exquisite and I'm stunned beyond words. It is indeed, a pearl.
02/04/08
Some of the descriptions at the beginning tripped me up a little bit, but the further in I got, the more moving the story became. Very nicely done!
02/05/08
What a cycle we can create. Wonderful telling of a sad but oh so prevelant tale. THANKS!