The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/08
Nicely done, and with some wonderful imagery.
02/05/08
You have some wonderful thoughts in this poem. I especially loved this, "But the grave calls to all, as deep calls to deep Fools renovate an earthly tent." This deserves more than one read to take it all in. Very nice work.