The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/08
Oh, my heart ached for that girl! Wonderful descriptions, wonderful emotions. Great writing!
02/02/08
Love the ending especially - and how you tied the pills in and wove them throughout the story. Very well done.
02/04/08
I felt her pain! Masterful writing!
Good for her! Loved how she tried to hang onto what she had started with. Hope it works.