The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/08
As I was reading, I was reminded that there is one more chocolate bar in the kitchen cupboard—I guess that means you did your job well. Too bad I am not going to take your advice (ha!) — gotta go get that bar! I didn't away get the rhyme pattern, but the sentiment sure came through.
Wow - a whole short story in poem form... really well done. I enjoyed the read.
01/31/08
Love this story set in a poem. It's not only little boys that can't stop at just one:)
Laury
02/01/08
LOVE this. So delightful in form, voice, and message.
02/02/08
This is soooo great. I love it! PTL 4 U!
Cute. I read this to my daughter who has a sweet tooth and she enjoyed it. Well written.
Aha! Yes...Lord, keep us out of 'Candyland'! What a perfect ending to a delightfully written poem! Loved it!!