The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/08
What a tragic tale - you did an excellent job on characterization, especially on the MC.

Some of the dialog felt a bit stilted.

That last line is VERY good.
02/06/08
Wow! This was a well-written story. Good twist at the end. Very thought-provoking:)
Laury