The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/05
The story flows well. It moves with a rhythmic ease.
What an intriguing story! Well done.
05/31/05
I liked this story. It was an interesting idea to have a figure of Greek mythology meet up with Christ. Well done!
05/31/05
Well composed and thought out, a nice complete story.
05/31/05
Very creative!
06/01/05
Interesting analogy, well written.
06/03/05
Wow! I must read up on my mythology. This certainly drew me in. Well done.
06/03/05
Not to be repetative of the other comments, but this was a very unique story. I enjoyed it very much!
06/06/05
Well thought out and the whole piece has a beautiful flow.
I liked your description of being bound in chains to a rock in a lonely dessert. Christ is freedom. Well done.