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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of “Don’t Try to Walk before You Can Crawl” (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (01/17/08)

TITLE: Dusty Rove & Carl Lynn
By Donald Paulson
01/24/08


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T’was once upon a time
But not all was sublime
With two different men

One who learned to live well
One who did not learn, fell
Though not the story’s end

Carl lived across the street
His home not very neat
Old house, inherited

Dusty lived in grand style
Mansion, seen for a mile
To the bank, credited

Carl, no edukashon
He worked as a mason
No money, yet happy

Dusty, a law office
Even had a mistress
Living like his Pappy

Carl’s friends flocked to his door
Always open for poor
Meager blessings to all

Dusty, no parties lacked
Big barbecue in back
Dark soul, though standing tall

Carl laying his red bricks
Barely noticed the hits
Though a depression came

Dusty never did save
After all, Pappy gave
Money lost, left him lame

Carl had friends who helped out
Never even a doubt
He’d do the same, alright

Dusty knew fate drew near
All he felt now was fear
Possessed no strength for fight

Change did come to Dusty
Mansion sold for paltry
Out on the street, no friends

Carl spied a man in rags
Possessions all in bags
Eyes glazed, he’s at his end

Arm around this stranger
“Come with me, no danger”
Head bowed low, a slight nod

To Carl’s house they did walk
From his heart was the talk
Sin, forgiveness, love, God

Bended knee, he replied
And that’s how Dusty died
Raised to life, was the fix

Together their one goal
Now to see men be whole
Kingdom built, brick by brick

In God’s economy
A servant you must be
In order to be great

Dusty understood now
For Carl had shown him how
To open Heaven’s gate

You must first die to self
Come to Jesus for help
T’is one life, soon will pass

Life is short, often hard
To Heaven don’t be barred
What’s done for God WILL last


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Jan Ackerson 01/25/08
I grinned at "no edukashun." Nice touch.

I had a hard time feeling the rhythm of this poem--it felt choppy to me--but I liked the unusual rhyme scheme.

Good job with this week's theme.
Hanne Moon 01/26/08
I liked this! I've seen more talent with poetry on these boards! Great job!
David F. Palmieri Sr.01/28/08
Interesting, unusual, unique, one of a kind, original...you are simply amazing my friend..."marching to the beat of a different drummer"...as usual...


   
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