The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
I grinned at "no edukashun." Nice touch.

I had a hard time feeling the rhythm of this poem--it felt choppy to me--but I liked the unusual rhyme scheme.

Good job with this week's theme.
01/26/08
I liked this! I've seen more talent with poetry on these boards! Great job!
Interesting, unusual, unique, one of a kind, original...you are simply amazing my friend..."marching to the beat of a different drummer"...as usual...