The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
Vickie is a girl just like me!! I liked this realistic view of her--good job.
01/25/08
Oh, I love the last line! Really cute.

There were some punctuation errors, especially in some of your dialogue. Just a bit of editing needed.

I like the realistic relationship portrayed here, and her sensitivity to God's voice.
Yeah for Vickie! She got the message! Keep up the good words.
01/26/08
Hey, I'm impressed with the B in Calculus. Fun story with a good lesson.
01/26/08
Yay!! She got a "B" in calculus! That's better than I could do! I liked your story, and your ending. A few punctuation errors. Good job!