The Official Writing Challenge
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Very realistic and written with a fun, wry voice.

The phrases that indicate the passing of time, like "One week later-" could easily be tacked onto the next sentence for a smoother flow.

I like the way you gave it an unexpected twist at the beginning by having her first try actually turn out well.

Great job illustrating the topic. Liked the little twist at the end. ;)
You're so good with dialogue that it makes your stories flow very naturally. This story is a great take on the topic, too. Another nice entry, Ann!
What a cute story! I like the fact that she grew up to be a hairstylist, also that her friend still trusted her.
I loved the teenage "barber" to professional hair styliest progression. I could picture this (and wondering if it actually happened this way :) ). Your title is clever and perfect!
Such a fun read! Perfectly on-topic, great dialog. Loved the ending - especially the last line. Great job!