The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
Great job with the non-judgemental and loving attitude of the helpful friend. And I'd never heard of the album "Joshua Judges Ruth"--what a clever title!
01/25/08
Nice dialogue:) Good story point too! You might want to recheck some of your punctuation and tense but overall you wrote a very nice story!!