The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
Neat. This went in a completely different direction that I thought it would at the beginning. The MC really had to crawl before she could stand up, much less walk. Great story.
I, too, didn't see where this was going. You made your point well. Nicely done.
01/30/08
What a neat story. I feel sad for the 2 amigos that walked away from their Christian upbringing, but it is good to see that we can stand solid in the faith if we take it one day at a time dependent upon Him.
02/01/08
Thank you for sharing this. With God, the journey is just as important as the destination - for it is the trials and tribulations we go through on the journey that prepare us for life's future challenges.