The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
This is short, but excellent. Your one word title is catchy and the rest of the story is really, really good. I like how you illustrated how his mother had caught him when he was younger, with strong sure arms and this time, when he did fall, that arms much bigger than hers had been there for him. That just makes this absolutely perfect! ^_^
01/26/08
Excellent take on the topic and a brilliant reminder of the necessity to hold ourselves and our children accountable for sexual relationship decisions. As a mother of two young adult sons, I am right there with you on this story.
01/28/08
Wonderful story, wonderful lesson, wonderful ending.
01/30/08
I love the authenticity of this piece. It is not preachy, but within it lies a message that needs to be heard more in this kind of way. I pray it will cause many to think.