The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/08
I'm thinking these guys are from western Egypt, right? Interesting take on the story of Moses. Creative, in that you thought to tell it from the POV of the two quarreling Hebrews.
01/29/08
I know you read SMART, CREATIVE AND WELL WRITTEN alot, but that's what comes to mind. Another great job. God bless.
01/31/08
Wow! I absolutely love this. Your opening sentence, "deader than my uncle’s great aunt" was great. Then later I had to smile at the "the man without an uncle" comment. Your humor is wonderful. Once I realized the story was about Moses I thought it was one of the best Bible-based stories I'd read. I had to read this to my daughter. Great writing!