The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
Powerful testimony about what happens to anyone who is exalted by man too early in their walk... Loved it.. remember to capitalize Bible... great writing.. intriguing story!
01/25/08
Air castle indeed. You followed up your title with a very thought-provoking piece. This was interesting to see how it all turned out for someone who seeemed to have literally everything going for him, from nothing to something. I liked the visual you used with the end, where he felt the stone dislodge, that was really good. ^_^
Nice job of suspense about what his downfall would be.