The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful testimony about what happens to anyone who is exalted by man too early in their walk... Loved it.. remember to capitalize Bible... great writing.. intriguing story!
Air castle indeed. You followed up your title with a very thought-provoking piece. This was interesting to see how it all turned out for someone who seeemed to have literally everything going for him, from nothing to something. I liked the visual you used with the end, where he felt the stone dislodge, that was really good. ^_^
Nice job of suspense about what his downfall would be.